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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Beautiful work, very well asymmetrically balanced. Perspective is consistent, terrain elevation is substantially varied without errors, and the almost whimsical / dreamlike style of the map makes it striking. The landscape itself looks very natural, and the glow on the rocks is very well done, appearing artificial yet not clashing with the rest of the style.

In terms of less positive feedback; There are a few oddities with scale - the chest on the lower left is almost as large as one of the smaller houses! I'd also second the suggestion of improving place names. In fact, I'd be happy to help you brainstorm up a few ideas. The text on the map is too small (hard to read without zooming in), so if you intend for this to be a UI piece, I'd double the font-size. Since the tape piece for the title "Lorcia Island" itself seems minimalist, it clashes with the rest of your beautifully detailed work. My suggestion would be to remove the tape entirely in favor of fancy underlining and the larger font for the title (You already have such a nice paper parchment background, why not show it off a little?) <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>.

Great work. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you make.